Feedback on Music Video

In order to improve my music video I'm going to make alterations to it that will help suit the specification and demographic better. These will include adding more detailed shots to my video to make it more easily understandable from the audiences prospective; re-shooting some shots so that they are clearer and editing some of the footage so it fits better with the audio features.

- For the first minute of my video, it consisted of my characters stood underneath a lamppost. In order to improve this I'm going to add in more shots of pictures being sketched in order to prevail the emotions the character are feeling throughout the music video. Similarly, its important that i use more close ups of the characters, this will help introduce feeling and emotions. Moreover, I'm going to include in certain scenes, elements of lip-syncing. This will add more character to my video.

- At 1:26, I need to change the way i have edited that scene in that instead of having 2 shots side by side, Im going to change it 3 so that it covers the entire screen. Due to the fact that the shot was filmed in portrait, I'm going to have to ensure that its edited so that all 3 of the shots are perfectly timed and link together.

- In between the walking shots, this is where I'm going to include the sketching shots to help give a greater understanding of the emotions being presented by the characters. I aim to do this in order to communicate a greater sense of coming to terms with your emotions.

- At the end of my video, it seems the emotions I'm wanting to represent are unclear. Therefore, I'm going to use shots of lip-syncing and more sketching in order to make my video more diverse.

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